So They Proclaim

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  • Passion

    So They Proclaim
    True and pure with their hearts aflame..
    They meet tonight without a claim
    Sharing their sights, they are the same
    Neither one of them wants to be tamed
    For seeking real passion is their sole aim
    Wrong or right, this is not a game
    Never to look back and no one to blame
    Their quest for desire endures them no shame
    Whispering songs into the night
    Whose greatest secret
    Is knowing their names...

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    Romano commented on So They Proclaim

    06-29-2009

    Much like a rendevous of a one nighter with all that one can imagine and dream of, passion giving and receiving with ecstacy as a mission to feel pleasure.
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    StandingBear commented on So They Proclaim

    06-25-2009

    A very interesting work. "Their quest for desire endures them no shame". *---------------------------* Great write.
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    BLASTHEME commented on So They Proclaim

    06-04-2009

    "The greatest secret lies in knowing their names" Wow! "They Proclaim" is a nicely woven short story/poem/riddle, which is very intriguing because it draws you in from the beginning & by the ending, it puzzles you as to "their names" like a moth to a flame. 10 from me Peace BLAS
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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