Someone

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    • sher92
    • "then she closed her eyes found relief in a knife the blood flows as she cries"~ between the trees

    Someone

    My friends aren’t my friends

    I have no friends

    Friends are just a sorry excuse for a mirage of security

    An excuse to drown my deep loneliness

    I long for just one good friend

    Someone to share the deep secrets trapped in the starless universe of my soul

    Someone to listen to me whine and bitch about my pathetic life

    Someone who won’t criticize and scrutinize my every step

    Someone who I can pour my soul out to and not regret it afterwards

    Someone to even be able to fathom how I feel inside

    Someone to accept who I’m not and not just who I am

    And someone to love all of me and not just half

     

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    Phoenix9 commented on Someone

    08-09-2010

    when u need some one, that you think is special, a part of your life ,,where are they when you need them the most, I can count the true friends on one hand, and they both are dead.what i am left with is what you wrote. a great write to say the least, your talent is beyond most,
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    Dasilva08 commented on Someone

    12-01-2009

    "Someone to listen to me whine and bitch about my pathetic life" yea thats what they really are ,they are never around when you need them most.
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    phatdaddee commented on Someone

    11-27-2009

    "The starless universe of my soul" WOW! Excellent poem! The good thing about friends is they are family we get to choose ourselves!
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    JadedJezzabel commented on Someone

    07-10-2009

    "Someone to accept who I’m not and not just who I am" this is a profound statement....made me pause to think about it........wise beyond your years you are........i would be so proud of a daughter like you.........
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    sher92

    07/10/2009

    awwww! omg thats one of the sweetest things anyone has ever said to me! Thanks=]. Yea my mom has only ever read one of my poems before

    vibesmaster commented on Someone

    07-07-2009

    Nice! well written.."Friends are a sorry excuse for a mirage of security" Hmmm just wondering what mood you were in when this piece..thanks for sharing.
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    sher92

    07/10/2009

    Thank u! I rly appreciate ur comment! and i wuz vry upset wen i wrote this I wuz feeling alone

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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