Special Someone

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    Special Someone

    I met my special someone, who takes my breath away.
    I wish thatI could be with him each and every day.
    He fills my heart and soul with the love I want to feel.
    He has kindness which is hidden by the bad boy appeal.
    Everyday I live, I seem to want him more.
    But many say he's a bad apple, rotten to the core.
    Only I know truly the good things he beholds.
    I'm sure when God made him, He truly broke the molds

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    laydbak1 commented on Special Someone

    08-11-2009

    This is a very nice way of saying judge not a book by it's cover... Whether bad boy or just acting like one, sounds like more of an ego thing very common to youthfulness... His true colors will surface someday and I hope you're first impression of him stays for the duration.... Nice, short write...

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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