streaming

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  • Love
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  • Emotional

    Poem Commentary

    its titled streaming because like streaming something ont the internet, everything goes out and nothing comes back.

    streaming

     Smiles given
    Frowns returned
    Happy to see you
    Can't stand my sight
    Love like a tide
    Rising anmd falling
    Different though
    Unpredictable
    From you
    Mine burns
    Constant
    Unextinguishable
    Although kisses
    Fall on air
    Embraces
    End with blood
    Dripping behind
    Tears race
    Unbarable pain
    I endure
    No choice
    Stubborn heart
    Scar covered
    Drumming still
    No more dancing
    Not like before
    Loved me once
    Never again
    No matter
    My love
    Is unconditional
    Damn it!

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    Katylove commented on streaming

    08-19-2009

    Strong from beginning to end.. with few words the story is powerful.. I like it.
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    wagner300 commented on streaming

    08-06-2009

    I love it! You have an amazing way of saying so much without having to use many words!
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    undiscovered

    08/06/2009

    thanx for the feed back. im glad u liked it

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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