Strength

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Strength

Stay strong, little one,
the worst has just begun,
you will receive hardships,
 but you will persevere,
you have the strength to carry on,
this I know,
for I know you as I know myself,
for you were me and I am you,
you must be strong or I shall never be.
For as you now know you are my past,
and I am your future,
it is of utmost importance,
 and you must have strength....
So awake, young child,
 you are fighting for your future...
you are fighting for your life...
you are fighting for your country...
you must have strength.

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BringMeBullets commented on Strength

03-25-2010

This is very good. I like it because it's true. Without strength, we are nothing. We must stay strong although times get hard. For in the end, downhill is quite beautiful.

Rainz commented on Strength

03-11-2010

Good work. Very palpable emotion in this one. a 9.5 from me

JudeDruid commented on Strength

03-03-2010

wow ... c'est profond ... Je suis vraiment un type anti-guerre de la personne. J'aime ce poème. neuf de moi. (wow...this is deep...i really am an anti war type of person. i love this poem. nine from me.) *o and yea im putting everythign i do in french...sorry*

leigh14

03/03/2010

ur fine dont worry about the french..... btw thanx for the comments

bluewolf commented on Strength

02-22-2010

This work brings to mind the path that lays way to the future of our youth. 5…10…15….20 years from now my son will find himself an adult in a world that is, at best, surviving. With trepidation I brought a child into this world. With love and understanding I hope to guide him past the hurtles of existence.

TCpoeboy commented on Strength

02-22-2010

simple short and good. I have to give U a 10 cause I like your direction.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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