SUCIDE

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    SUCIDE
    People wonder why?
    others' take their life.
    many , many reason why????????????
    I cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    some false hope,
    many on dope
    many can't cope
    pushed aside , abuse most of their live
    feeling rejected,drugs take over
    some hit bottom, than you have those who make it out and survive
    nobody wins hurt feeling
    on both side.

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    JazzyBaby commented on SUCIDE

    01-17-2011

    I wanna start by saying that your poem is beautiful and well written and that you're right. Some people think they have a good reason they can't deal with their reality. I used to be gravely suicidal, sometimes, I still get that flicker of thought in my head. We grow up in abusive homes, or we have people who've left us alone in the world, people who we'll only see once we're dead. My twin brother died when I was 14, that's when I started feeling dead. I still feel empty but I think I finally had to understand that he wouldn't want that for me. If anyone does feel suicidal ever, anyone reading this, stop and think about why. Stop and call someone who can help you, people care about you.
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    Ozzy77 commented on SUCIDE

    11-14-2009

    Too true. This poem delves into a very sad issue, self-murder and suicide, as well as drug use and abuse. I will not go into my views and acceptance of the issue of suicide, but just stopped by to check out your work.
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    Lydia

    11/16/2009

    yeah times i wonder who's the brave ones

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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