Suffocating

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    Suffocating
    Im suffocating
    I cant take this...
    Im dying for a change of pace
    rewind, reset my intentions
    im searching for a saving grace.
    This time, its time taht i recognize
    my ambition that make me mine.

    So I'll put my pen to the paper
    and ill put my words in a verse.
    A non-stop flight to convince myself
    that Im capapble...that im not cursed.
    Ill reach for the sky and pull
    my heaven down to earth!

    Im suffocating
    I cant take this
    Im dying for
    one last request
    give me strength
    to fuel my hunger
    prepare me
    for what comes next
    Oh, dear god
    I dont pray often
    But give me strength
    nevertheless...
    Help me rise up
    from my coffin
    Ill chase my dreams
    til my last breathe.

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    am2anangel commented on Suffocating

    06-07-2009

    very well written. I especially liked the line about pulling your heaven down to earth. I took from this a last plee for forgiveness and a 2nd chance to get it right. I enjoyed it very much.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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