Summer

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    I love summer days! They are so inspiring!

    Summer

    The sky, bright and blue

    The clouds, shredded white cotton

     Floating up high.

    Blue

    White

    Bright.

    On the earth my eyes

    Capturing the light,

    Absorbing the hues.

    My heart renewed.

    Life pulsing within:

    Warm synergy.

    Life

    Above, around and beyond me.

     

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    Trailmixed commented on Summer

    02-09-2010

    I feel the breath of a fresh summer, warmth to my fingertips, fulfilling the my poor circulation by an early spring. Thank you for this wonderful experience!

    mariadapoesia

    02/09/2010

    Thank you Trailmixed! Your comment made my day!

    randomgal commented on Summer

    02-09-2010

    I like this poem, I can feel the warmth of a summer day and this chilly winter day just fades away!

    mariadapoesia

    02/09/2010

    TY, randomgirl! I'm happy My poem made you think of summer warmth! Enjoy it!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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