survival
Ever think you met the man of your dreams, til one day he needed to blow off some steam, everyday you woke up black and blue, and every day you lied so no one knew. There was days when I thought what if i didnt wake up, end the pain, end the game of cat and mouse, being tortured in my own house, not knowing if Id walk from one beating to the next, then id hear my babies cry, and then i knew why i had to survive.survival
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- jacque2sweet
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08-09-2009
- Wow!! Thats harsh and I feel you'r pain your I know how you feel I was with my babies mother for 5 years and I took some beatings all cause I didnt hit a woman till oneday i snaped and thats why I aint with her anymore seems like you stayed either for the kids or cause you didnt wont to be alone??
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optimistic commented on survival
08-08-2009
- Survive was the best challenge of them all you did it and the poem proves your courage good write.
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cliftondurant commented on survival
08-07-2009
- that's right be a strong women and take control of your life your true love is waiting he will treat you right thanks for sharing
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08-07-2009
- I cried i have never seen such pain put into words... I hope you escaped the abuse... great poem
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