Waiting on you

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Waiting on you

why do I always feel I am waiting on you.
I stare at the phone waiting for it to ring,
The sound of your voice and the pleasure it brings.
If only you knew,
Maybe you should have to wait on me.

Then finally days later after you promise to call you do.
All you can say is whats wrong with you.
My only reply is I was waiting on you.

to be continued...

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photochick commented on Waiting on you

09-11-2009

flows well together broken hearts are the hardest things to deal with look forward to the rest keep up the good work

boomboom56 commented on Waiting on you

09-11-2009

Another broken heart and promise. You put the words together well.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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