Tears

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  • Sadness

    Tears
    Optical dew drops
    form liquid pools of distortion
    altering my view of the world
    as I sit contemplating
    this poem

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    SavVySam commented on Tears

    01-31-2010

    I like this poem very much! You've penned a thoughtful piece.
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    FranzJ commented on Tears

    11-08-2009

    it is too easy to have the world distorted - always keep your own piont of view - nice
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    neosoul

    01/10/2010

    so true... thanks for reading

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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