twilight

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  • Dreams

    twilight

    come lay with me
    and be mine
    atop silkened threads of cotton refined

    in slumber's peace
    dream with me
    of sunny skies and butterflies

    in silence dwell
    under sleep's sweet spell
    until we awaken renewed
    ready to greet another day

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    dancinghawk commented on twilight

    02-01-2010

    another precious bit ... the closeness of night, sustaining us through days that may or may not be filled with butterflies, lol ... funny, i started a piece this week on "twilight" tho our approaches are so different it might be a different word, lol ... thx for posting! -dh

    neosoul

    02/02/2010

    thank you for reading--- looking forward to your piece and approach on twilight-- I am intrigued!

    klassik commented on twilight

    01-22-2010

    Bravo! .

    SavVySam commented on twilight

    01-19-2010

    A very nicely done work, that falls easy on the eyes and ears!

    neosoul

    01/22/2010

    thank you for reading

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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