The Challenge

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    The Challenge

    A pink typewriter,
    A blind burrito,
    And twelve violent starfish

    Lived with a blighter
    Who’s heart was hollow
    And sang of nights in anguish.

    His typewriter, broke
    His burrito, gone
    His starfish, fighting less.

    He never awoke
    His life forgone
    And no one knew his address.

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    ginga commented on The Challenge

    05-13-2009

    wonderful imagery, personification,rhyming,and nice use of fantasy. ginga

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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