The Levee (writers block)

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    The Levee (writers block)

    My pen's growing heavy.
    I have nothing to say.
    Thoughts behind a levee;
    I pray it will give way.

    I'm backing up with emotions,
    and I have no words to comply.
    I'm drifting through the minds oceans
    while all my memories float by.

    I can feel mirages in the distance.
    They are my intuitions rhythmic flow.
    I will choose the tide of most resistance
    for I know it's the only way to grow.

    To stay calm and collected is what it will take.
    Hope and strength pass through me guiding me with their wake,
    it's here I see the truth in what I need to make,
    my own inspired wave; and now the levee shall break.


    (syllable sets: 6-8-10-12)

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    writersblock commented on The Levee (writers block)

    04-21-2009

    I like the way you structured this poem. The shorter verse in the begining doubling by the end, nice...

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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