The Misguided One

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    The Misguided One

    There was a time when I had an innocent mind
    When the truth was known and it was easy to find
    Aging through bombardments of adopted belief
    I've grown to this point where I'm praying for relief
    And I can't make myself believe in what they say
    They tell me I'm wrong for creating my own way
    I don't need a leader while I'm under the sun
    Because I will do as I do... until I'm done
    As the misguided one

    They told me I was blind and they could help me see
    So they victimized my mind with their sympathy
    Keeping me down on the ground where I felt alone
    The true caring hands would help me stand on my own
    A scare tactic gimmick where their faith is for sale
    No creator of love would ever create a hell
    No need to follow me when we share the same sun
    Because I will do as I do until I'm done
    As the misguided one

    I cast no blame while transcending from this level
    My choices are mine not put off on some devil
    I only want to be Human; to breathe and live
    I won't take from the hate but the love I will give
    Divine thought is that of Divine understanding
    Just open your heart, your mind and stop demanding
    If I ever cross you while under the same sun
    I will wish you well, as you do, until you're done
    As the misguided one.

    (syllable structure; 12-x8,6--full set repeat 3 times)

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    barecare commented on The Misguided One

    02-01-2010

    great piece. thanks for sharing. i thoroughly enjoyed reading this one!

    Rainz commented on The Misguided One

    04-26-2009

    Well structured, well said, I liked it and related to it. Great work!

    Joanie65 commented on The Misguided One

    04-20-2009

    Quite a strong piece of work I like it

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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