The Northern Lights

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    The Northern Lights

    I often sit in pensive mood,
    With mind and nature in collude.
    Gazing at the stars display,
    Like a military foray.
    When skies from north seemed colour bound,
    It was a sight which did astound.
    Curtain of green lay on black bed,
    With tinges of purple edged with red.
    And through green haze a starry glitter,
    I catch the traces of Big Dipper.
    And as it swirled across the skies,
    It really caught my inner eye.
    Reflected on the now calm lake,
    Dancing on a small boats wake.
    Its colours how they bend and smear,
    The once calm waters danced with tears.
    In Alaska you can catch its glamour,
    And some times down in Alabama.
    The northern lights with its mystique,
    Is a wondrous sight for all to see.

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    SavVySam commented on The Northern Lights

    08-04-2009

    You completely capture the magic of the phenomena! I was raised in Alaska and miss it still!!! Great job!

    goldie500 commented on The Northern Lights

    05-27-2009

    He describes the place that is remembered the most. What a memory. Nicelly done. Alaska is a favorite place to write about evidently in this case. There are good details in the poem that tells you where he was on vacation. Look for the details in the writing to get more out of it.

    dyinginside commented on The Northern Lights

    05-04-2009

    wow! your poem is deep I really love the wording and the descriptions. you got a picture here i can really imagine what you see here and the feelings behind it all.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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