The Ocean

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    The Ocean
    The ocean is like the sky,
    It has vast wide open spaces,
    Fishes are like people in airplanes,
    Always moving around,
    Dolphins are a beautiful as the sky at night,
    The ocean makes music like the birds make in the sky,
    The ocean is a beautiful place to be.


    By: Melissa Daffron

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    Dreamer123 commented on The Ocean

    07-31-2009

    this is amazing. keep the great work. this is incredible. very relaxing. i love this piece. :) God bless you. you got talent. :) God bless
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    SpiritSong commented on The Ocean

    07-31-2009

    This is truly delightful Melissa..it leaves one feeling free and happily in peace and inner joy...really nice..thank you for blessing us all with it..."SpiritSong"
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    carey commented on The Ocean

    04-19-2009

    Very nice
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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