The Promise

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  • Forgiveness

    The Promise
    I'm writing you this love letter to let you know I'm sorry,
    for the bullshit that I started, it wasn't even funny.

    I'm going to get the help I need,
    but I need the help from you too.

    Until I see the doctor,
    please help me get out of my bad moods.

    I will do the same for you,
    if you really want me to.

    I really love you a lot baby,
    so I'm going to make you a promise.

    I promise you from here on out,
    I'll be a better lover.

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    BTurner commented on The Promise

    09-07-2009

    Well I hope that promise is fufilled. Too many promises in my life had been broken, so I believe in promises like the Tooth Fairy or Fairy Godmothers.
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    KimberlyMock commented on The Promise

    12-05-2008

    I enjoyed the poem Thank you
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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