The Prostitute's Tale

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Inspired by the famed Chaucer, I sought to attempt to complete his project.  This was the first of the attempts; and a character whom I have come to adore---she's so incredibly beautiful.

The Prostitute's Tale

‘Tis low eve:

Day’s beacon sheds

Broad, orange strands

Long, and resting on

The thin green line.

It’ll be soon I go.

Earn me bread--

Beneath the stars

That cannot condemn me

As they be privy to truths.

 

Aye, moon—

Show yer face in discord.

Remember me?—

Bastard daughter o’ Marny?

Then took ‘er own blood

Mixed wid her breastfeed

Across my new mouth?

Remember? You filt my eyes then!

Surely not too many to recall

A speckled face like mine!

 

‘Tis nigh:

Talc an’ lavender petal,

Hide all suspicions.

Aye, they pay for fresh

Or they don’t pay well.

Turn the linen an’

Perk the down--for

Fat butchers an’

Be-speckled penny-men

Need soft for their laurels.

 

Aye, lanterns of the marketplace:

A’glowin’ like the entrance to Hell.

Brides haste to their hearths,

Prepare, and wait.

Dare not tread when I creep

And lure their mate

With masquerade and

Shallow approval, of flattery.

Men, so weak and distrustful,

Wander night with sticky arms!

   

‘Tis the hour.

Loosen garters to dangle

Just below a man’s chin.

Compress spearmint leaves

‘Tween grinding ivory

An’ lying tongue.

I be fit.  I be hungry.

I will eat tomorrow an’

A new hat an’ parasol

Will defend me from honest day.

 

Aye, me belly—

Let no child spring from ye’ now.

Should sweet love not find

Me worthy of husband, hearth—

Let not temptation of mother’s weakness

Paint silver to draw red

And poison the nourish of daughter—

Who will come to fear

The face of the Moon

Or commune of stars.

 

I go now.

 

 

 

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tenderpoison commented on The Prostitute's Tale

07-15-2009

completely wonderful, she's wistful and ironic...she has men pegged but still hopes for one of her own...love the language, Chaucer would approve I think. 10

Tempestlady commented on The Prostitute's Tale

07-14-2009

Like the ole fashio' tongue. bit hard to follow at times. Reads rough out loud. Great message and way to get the grity truth accross to your reader. Like its written in the stars. Sad, so sad. Good write..........

laydbak1 commented on The Prostitute's Tale

07-10-2009

A side note about this piece, I wrote a song/poem many years ago about a prostitute's tale titled, Ode To Carrie... It's written in common English and isn't posted yet, but reading this one of yours and a few others on the subject, perhaps I will soon; just to show a little diversity in the things I write about... Good stuff...

laydbak1 commented on The Prostitute's Tale

07-10-2009

I recognized it, but not having a very well-versed, buccaneer'ish mentality, I had to stop and think throughout this piece several times to try and get the gist of the lines, but I did get the story's message... It's well done and I agree, it's a very entertaining read...

Crush commented on The Prostitute's Tale

07-07-2009

my goodness ! this is spectacular, among the best. very entertaining but sad. welldone ! a 10 from me.

Fegger

07/07/2009

Crush--thanks so much for your commentary on "..Prostitute.."; I really appreciate your understanding of the beauty in this character. Fegger

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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