The Wind Returns

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I have shown this one to a few people i know.  i constantly have to let them know , in this poem I speak as though through her perspective

The Wind Returns

Assess still born clatter
Petition she might stay
Cinder to ashes, scatter
Forlorn wind, I pray

Chronicled illicit affair
Regrets our choice
In her lair
Abated wind rejoice

Tell me
Quiet, wait
Show me
Open Gate

And
The
Wind
Returns

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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