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With these notes I need  no quotes, all illustrated nothing ever wrote. Sitting back thinking about all the things that have happen to me, a feine for the dream not the kind given the kind only taken, im awaken by the inner self, knowledge is the power but money is the wealth, at least that's what they teach, I tried going to church but the preacher doesn't know what to teach, with a fading economy a government monopoly people loosing jobs and more govt policy who wins in the race where they start in last place 

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Savant commented on these notes

11-03-2009

The last shall be first and the first shall be last. Believe it, trust it. Thoughtful piece. It acknowledges things we all go through, doubt, confusion, hopelessness. Keep writing Good Sir!

LovelyLyricist commented on these notes

11-03-2009

Very deep but I say to you find another church one with a preacher that is a teacher, never give up on GOD. Lovely expressions of life

gbone05

11/03/2009

what are you talking about no one has given up on god your reading to much into it

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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