Thirst

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    Continuously thirst for life and never cease to quench the minds need to be nourished.

    Thirst

     Thirst

     

    I have a thirst for life and for understanding - a thirst that is unquenchable.

     

    I stand at he edge of life and cannot comprehend the endless opportunities, nor the vastness of knowledge that multiplies in it’s own existence.

     

    If I were to drink from the ocean of awareness every eternal moment I would never be able to drain the waters of wisdom dry.

     

    My comprehension of this ceaseless flow just increases my internal need to experience the immeasurable

     

    If I never stop pouring from the seas of learning then my cup of gained intelligence will never empty.

     

    May I not obtain failure simply because I have failed to realize unachieved abilities

     

     

    J.H.

     

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Thirst

    09-05-2009

    Complete and perfect,..................enjoyed reading this very much.
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    StandingBear commented on Thirst

    08-09-2009

    A nicely written work full of zest for life and learning.
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    Seek2BInspired

    08/10/2009

    Thank you for reading and appreciating!

    BlkQueen commented on Thirst

    08-08-2009

    I'm really speechless. This is so powerful. Excellent job!
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    Seek2BInspired

    08/10/2009

    Speechless, really - what an honor you pay me. I will be honored to read your written voice - thank you!

    optimistic commented on Thirst

    08-08-2009

    This is once again a great write fabolous in the words of hope.
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    Seek2BInspired

    08/10/2009

    My friend I am always so very grateful to have you read and comment on my pieces. Thank you SW

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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