Thunderstorm

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    Thunderstorm

    I hear it rolling outside my window.
    Sometimes it kinda scares me.

    You can hear it sometimes from miles away.
    Following it is a beautiful flash.
    Like when you take pictures at a play.

    Although sometime scary,
    it can be beautiful.
    Like a swift ballet taking place instantly.

    The pitter-patter or rain accompanys it sometimes.
    Like the sky is slowly bleeding away all of its perilous dry summer days.

    My mom used to say that the rough booms I heard was God,
    making Heaven, and that the flashes I saw,
    was God taking pictures.

    I've often wondered how something could be
    so beautiful and dangerous all at once.

    It is a thunderstorm.
    Its beautiful and dangerus all at once.
    It is a thunderstorm.

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    WordSlinger commented on Thunderstorm

    07-31-2009

    Good stuff, I like watching them from above like on a mountain top, when the storm is below, instaed of above.

    Crush commented on Thunderstorm

    06-24-2009

    I am more and more impressed by the young poets such as yourself on this site. Everyone has a diffenet inrterpretation of a thunderstorm but "God taking pictures" and " Life a swift ballet taking place instantly" is simply gorgeous imagery. Thanks for the share.

    Crush

    06/24/2009

    I meant to type "LIKE" instaed of "Life".

    GODSGIRL1516

    07/29/2009

    thankyou very much.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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