Till The Music Ends

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Simply written from the heart and inspired by a wonderful woman who doesn't feel the same way about me as I do her... Regardless, I am glad to have her in my life!

Till The Music Ends

The moon, shining ever so bright

    Bathes the land in bitter cold light;

Ghostly shadows moving around

    Pacing their dance over the ground.

 

Their feet move, dancing on air

    Light gleaming off bodies so bare;

Around and around they quickly twirl

    Bodies entwined they whirl and whirl.

 

Haunting music drives their step

    Songs written with promises all un-kept;

Unearthly melodies filling the night

    Keeping the beat, step left, step right.

 

These are the spirits of long lost loves

    That flitter about like shadowy doves;

Yet are the lovers all unrequited

    Dancing in vain... never united.

 

My soul dances this dance tonight

    Love lost in the chill stark light;

Dance, my love, dance and ever tend

    Until that day when the music ends.   

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CasimirJash commented on Till The Music Ends

09-01-2009

Don't stop til you get enough, lol Great Poem. I enjoyed it

RicoChameleon

09/01/2009

Thank you! I appreciate it!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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