True Feelings

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    True Feelings

    Love is Perfect and love is kind,
    Love is our hearts intertwined.
    As my heart begins to fall,
    out of the wilderness i hear you call.
    As i hear you, a voice, a tender sound,
    It stops my tears from hitting the ground.
    I take your hand to hold it near,
    hoping you fight back my every fear.
    But at this moment in time youre falling away,
    My heart is screaming "Why won't you stay"
    because of your presence, my heart beats so free,
    all the while, i know we will never be.
    I can't help but to show you my love,
    you gave my heart wings like a snow white dove.
    so even though i may feel free,
    why do i feel emptiness inside of me?
    I love you to death and i hope you truely know.
    that i sit back and watch you go.
    You did so great teaching my heart to fly,
    but without you near it never takes to the sky.

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    SuperChick76 commented on True Feelings

    12-10-2009

    Indeed, love is a beautiful thing, yet can be so painful. Nice write, once again, you should proofread for grammar errors, but no biggie. Your phrasing was very nicely done, original even. I Like the last line "but without you near, it never takes to the sky" brilliant. Good job.

    Coreyhill

    12/10/2009

    thank you so much for taking the time to red these. i am horrinle verbally but if i put it on paper it is right there

    crazzyy4u commented on True Feelings

    12-09-2009

    that is reallly good it reminds me of 1 corithian good job hope you win

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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