wingless angel

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    wingless angel

     i know you're here sent from above,
    you spread your spirit like wings of a dove.
    you hear my plea and my humble cry,
    you have came to save me, to walk by my side.
    before you came, i was down and out
    ill praise you in this storm. so please end this drout.
    you know me by name you know my heart,
    take me to where forever starts,
    my wingess angel you still do shine,
    up to the father, together we'll fly.

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    whiteoleander commented on wingless angel

    12-09-2009

    very sweet and to the point but not lacking in flow. good read it makes one question things when they read things like this. your being the feet and God through poetry. *applauds*
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    Coreyhill

    12/09/2009

    do not applaud me, but only GOD

    Ravoya commented on wingless angel

    11-03-2009

    hmmm. interesting. it's not a bad poem but it could use some flow work
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    koolmom0 commented on wingless angel

    11-03-2009

    This is beautifully written and said. Awesome write. Koolmom
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    SuperChick76 commented on wingless angel

    11-02-2009

    That was actually a fairly nice poem, very sweet. However, I did noticed some grammical errors you should look into. Such us "i" instead of "I" and "hear" instead of "here" little things like that. But all in all, it was a nice sweet poem, the kinda poem that makes people smile. Good job.
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