Unconditional

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I was inspired by someone I love who is obviously not in a good place right now but has learned from mistakes and faith in God is keeping love, peace and mental well-being where they need be.

Unconditional

The red brick wall between you and me

Not for always; just for now it must be

 

Off to the showers, hope I get one today

Out to the yard; then to work for low pay

 

No coffee today; gotta save some cents

Until there’s enough for that tv set.

 

Learned to sacrifice and do without

The way of the Lord; the path to His House

 

Oh my loving God, is this what you meant

When you said I must serve you and repent?

 

I accept all I’m given and am grateful

To still be alive,  healthy and not hateful

 

It’s hard in here but you keep me safe

I needed this time to clear my plate

 

For now I’m learning most of all

What love is  - when it is - unconditional

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Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

ladynita’s Poems (4)

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