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The morning sun

walks on the street,

Smiles, greetings, goodbyes

Everything in between

Your love and mine

The ephemeral state

High hopes

Restless desires

Change me back

Make me whole again.

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poetheart87 commented on Unravel

07-23-2009

I loved this. It does capture the essence of a new day and what you hope for. Very short, to the point and very good.

Nadia1986 commented on Unravel

07-07-2009

short but to the point nice you can tell what you want

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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