Waste...

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    Waste...

    I’m Heart broken

    Can’t you tell

    You don’t call to clear the waters

    Or to proclaim any feelings

    You won’t leave yourself venerable

    You won’t fight for what I thought we shared

    No you won’t at all, to save us

    This isn’t balanced

    Why does it feel like I’m the only one hurting

    There was a moment

    When I wanted to start the rest of my life

    With you

    When the Dream

    Would have been our happy ending

    This hurts like hell

    To see your true feelings

    Through your actions

    I thought I meant more to you

    Thought I was more to your Heart

    Truly sad to see you in this way

    Congratulations

    You’ve succeed in truly braking my Heart

    Yes that means

    I fell for you

    -Fin-  

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    poett commented on Waste...

    02-22-2014

    That is sad n mean on her part. Everyone deserves to be heard n to feel their couple cares about their feelings. Good luck n you deserve better than her n her cold heart. Hugs
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    poett commented on Waste...

    02-22-2014

    You know what? I used to write when I was upset. I would put all the emotion I felt in paper but never showed it to the person I intended to be for. I would finally get over those feeling n finally publish it or share it but never to that person. One day I realized it did me good n it was like therapy to clear my soul n heart from pain but the persons that hurt me sometimes never knew nor found out what they did to me. So I decided that when I write I would share it with them. Let them know how much they hurt me. Well it helped lots. Many times people don't intend to bring pain to you. They are just doing what they think is right but when someone confronts them it like opening their mind, heart n eyes to notice others feelings. I see so much emotion n pain in your writes so I wondered if you ever let them know how you feel.
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    TheLastCowboy

    02/22/2014

    this time I did, I told her about these writes but she doesnt read them, she doesnt care... that hurts in its self and shows how bad of a heart she has. I dont know why i cant close her out, she really got to me and I really did fall for her/care for her.

    poetryspeaks commented on Waste...

    02-18-2014

    Wow there were a lot of strong feeling you can feel in the poem! This was a great poem.
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    TheLastCowboy

    02/19/2014

    I hate it when I feel like everything is one sided with a woman. In this poem I'm simply stating that it does feel like she cares or that it hurts her like it does me. (the way things went and ended up) Thx for the feed back!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.
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