what i choose to show

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    what i choose to show

     i choose to hide and never let people know
    to afraid of what this world holds
    my eyes are the mirrors
    from what my heart seen
    my fingers only bleed because of the grief
    my back holds so much walks from my journeys
    that lead to peoples feet
    my pain comes like the storms in my eyes
    my love is like a new born being born at nite
    my emptyness is more than a jail
    its a whole new prison
    except i aint in no cell
    i see what others dont see
    i cry for more people
    then i do for the people hurting me
    i search to find someone just like me
    but in life we are all born differently
    in my mind i was already born again
    i just use my knowledge and ask somebody to pray for me
    i fight back tears and give all my sins to God
    many have come and gone
    but my life i choose to carry on
    my wounds hurts more than just a broken heart
    i have theses invisible scars not from a beating
    just from the beating of words you say to a love one
    look me in my eyes and tell me you dont see rain
    how many more storms is gonna carry me away
    the darkness is my eyes is from being alone
    see i might smile but where is my home?
    we hold close to the ones who say they will never leave
    but what happens when we give them more love
    and less respect to our saviour Jesus Christ
    its to many wolves trying to fool my eyes
    its time for me to finally live and be thankful for my life

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    phatdaddee commented on what i choose to show

    03-01-2010

    You bring the pain every time you write, don't you? I really enjoyed all of the emotion I could feel while reading this one! Great job Keep it up!
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    destiny615

    03/01/2010

    thanks yes i want all my poems to express what i am feeling at dat moment.i have alot of good ones and some are so deep to me.thanks keep reading.i hope u enjoy them.

    fromthespirit commented on what i choose to show

    02-25-2010

    I like this poem because it was honest, heartfelt and passionate. I loved it.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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