a real man....

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a real man....

a real man wont leave
he will stick to his responsibilities
he will be there in your time of need
when it comes to fighting he always got your back
never stepping out on you cause you give him more
thats why yall are intact
he will be your dream when you cant find yourself
he will never let you do things
without asking if you need help
he will bring his kids up
with so much love
hes more than a father
hes a strong man
when you cry
he will dry your tears
he places you safe in arms
always holding you near
hes your shelter
and he protects you from the rain
hes your weakness
when he's driving your insane
he has more than a brain
he has knowledge and everything to gain
hes your book which makes you look
harder and harder again
what type is your man?
does he do things for you
just because?
will he buy your personal
just cause he keeps up with your days
dont get me wrong hes hardcore to the bone
a lil senstive thats cause his mother raised him
but strong in every part
a good man who goes to church
a good man who goes to work
and help pay ya'lls bills
a good man who calms you down
when your angry and you feel like pouting
a good man who will accept you kids
even though they aint his
a good man who show you so much love
that you was thinking you was cheating
on him with a new love
thats how good he is
he aint perfect and yes he makes mistakes
but he choose to show you love and be thankful
for the food on his plate
he can chill with his boys
but he always checks in
when yall out he makes sure everybody
knows whos his love of his life is
a real man who puts a ring on your finger
and charish you even when you get bigger
who walks beside you hand and hand
who watches tv with you
but still be a man
now how many out there knows what i mean?
who makes love to you like your in a scene
from a deep movie
flowers on the bed just because
a real man now thats whos gonna show you love.

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irchristo commented on a real man....

03-03-2010

I liked the feeling of abundance. My wife is abundant like this man that you describe. I want to be this man Good work.

destiny615

03/04/2010

thanks please do all that you can to be a good man,neva take ur wife for grantied.thanks keep reading my poems.thanks so much.

phatdaddee commented on a real man....

02-25-2010

I'm honored to post the first comment on this poem: This is awesome!! It is the perfect blend of common sense and sensitivity. Great job, good vibe!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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