speakin my mind

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    speakin my mind

    My words are a battle
    thats ready to begin war
    so many make it
    so many uncounted for
    the lost souls
    mothers cry for
    fathers hold on to belief
    a family is strong but are made to believe
    this war could be a good thing
    how many guns will go off?
    how much blood lost/
    many phones calls
    dont compare to a hug
    and a smile
    love them while you have them
    argue when you can
    a solider is more then war
    there supposed to be a few good men
    what about the women at war?
    do they suffer as well
    or do they take charge?
    life can be a sacrifice
    what about there war
    many without there kids
    a mother starring at the front door
    while the child sleep
    or no one to hold on
    such a bad thing
    many say hurry up and come home
    but many die for one thing
    i aint saying war is all bad
    but tell it to the people
    who missing out of the life they had

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    LMoe commented on speakin my mind

    04-15-2009

    keep speaking your mind i aint never mad

    organicchick commented on speakin my mind

    04-08-2009

    Yeah....all so true. Good writing.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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