When You Love Somebody

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    • bmoss5
    • is tending to the little one. think she will be the center of my next poem.

    When You Love Somebody

    When you love somebody

    There's no greater feeling in the world

    Than caring for someone so deeply

    as a guy feels about his girl

    You're speechless when you're near them

    and miss them when they're away

    You want to be held in their arms

    every minute of everyday

    When you two are together

    everything bad seems to disappear

    From the soft gazes in each others eyes

    to whispering sweet nothings in their ear

    Love is patient and need not be rushed

    it's a mutual feeling of each other

    Love is only seeing one

    and not caring about another

    You know it's love when they're on your mind

    after you're away for more than a minute

    and your days seem so much happier now

    that your life has them in it

    To love another with all ones heart

    is the greatest gift one can give

    When you feel that they're the one

    and they're your reason to live

    They are your first thought in the morning

    and your last thought at night

    They're everything you've ever wanted

    when you're with them it all feels right.

    No one can tell you that you're in love

    it's a feeling felt deep within

    They complete you like no one else can

    They are your very best friend

    Once you love, that feeling is eternal

    it never dies or fades away

    They have taken the key to your heart from you

    They are locked in your heart, forever to stay

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    Chrisjan commented on When You Love Somebody

    05-31-2009

    This is a poem that should be published. The feeling arising from your heart + soul express, such a calmness of how Love arrived in your Life. Extremely well written.Thank you for sharing.

    xxpowersxx commented on When You Love Somebody

    05-31-2009

    wish i could completely agree =/ but its a very good poem. I know that feeling wholly. I pray you keep it through and through.

    Indigogreen16 commented on When You Love Somebody

    05-29-2009

    Nice poem, I like the highlight and and blue writing, how did you get that on here? Very expressive.

    sincere commented on When You Love Somebody

    05-29-2009

    Very good. Even though I have given up on the concept of love, you capture the jist of it very well.

    cdeluhery87 commented on When You Love Somebody

    05-29-2009

    omg i luv this poem.......its sweet and kinda makes me think of when ya first fall in luv with someone(just how great it is)

    Kukia

    05/29/2009

    I felt good after reading this.Ur concept of love is straight to mine or anyones heart.One could only hope 4 such a love,Bryan aka Kukia

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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