Where Were You

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    Where Were You

    Where were you when I was burned and broken hearted?
    When the days passed by my window so cold and dark.
    While the seeds of change and the seeds of life were planted outside my window.

    Where were you when the time was right and the love was unheard?
    I know where you were; you was hanging yourself on someone elses words dieing to believe in what you heard.
    But I stared streight inside the shining sun.

    Where were you when I was lost in thought and lost in time,
    While the seed of time walked out of my life?
    I ponder on this dangerous zone,
    When time stood still and unknown.
    But I headed stright for the shining.

    Where were you when I was burn and broken hearted,
    While the seeds of change, and the seeds of life was planted outside my window.
    But you hung yourself on someone's elses words dieing to believe what heard.

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    am2anangel commented on Where Were You

    06-10-2009

    very well written i also was captured by the line sk commented on. There are times when someone in our lives are just not there for us like we would wish. I also find this poem to possible refer maybe that someone you have even just met and wonder why you hadn't met them sooner. I also have a poem called where were you if you would be interested in reading it. thank you for sharing. Tonya

    sk commented on Where Were You

    03-13-2009

    I love that line, "But you hung yourself on someone elses words, dying to believe what you heard"....

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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