who am i

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  • Rocone
  • is back and gona move my yahoo poems to here, check me out!!!

who am i

i don’t know what to think, to say, or to do

i want to be the one that makes You smile

i would like to know You, just what can i do for You

i could enjoy Your love, in my life, for a long while

 

what You have to give, i would talk it all

You have a pure energy that feeds my soul

i would love to taste Your world, no matter how small

and i would eat You up, every bit, completely whole

 

who are You?  Are You someone i should live for?

is there something i can do for You?  To make You mine

i will take it nice and slow, because, You i adore

for Your love i would do almost anything, anytime

 

take me, use me, make me Your favorite toy

i can show Your body what my lips are for

i will give Your mind, body, and soul, total joy

Anything You desire, i will be at Your door

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olmagal commented on who am i

07-03-2009

I enjoyed your poems. Love seems to be passing you by most of the times, huh. It happens to us all. Nice poem, just a few punctuation problems,but nice.

Rocone

07/04/2009

I was moving them from a location that was being deleted, I will get to them all. Thanks

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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