Brown Sugar

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Brown Sugar

I find myself at night replaying the time I spent with you last.
rehearing your thoughfullness, or the way you say my name
I am not sure what to say to get you to change you whole life
I would give you one day or the rest of my life, for just a taste

I get lost in the feelings of expression and of what is real
I stir myself by thinking of you and releasing years of silence
All those songs about the one, and she comes disguised as a angel
love on first sight can only begin to describe my attraction to you

It seems like the check list to my heart has been given to you
The motion you create lulls me into a pleasure of being unborn
Each meeting brings me closer to the point of spilling my guts
I am under your spell, come in and save me, let me be your dream

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BlacknWhite commented on Brown Sugar

07-01-2009

This is beautiful. To be that to someone is the greatest thing. Love the last line.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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