You can't catch me

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A song I wrote about an unstoppable serial killer. I had just finished watching Friday the 13th when i wrote this.

You can't catch me

One by one the people fall,
Like the leaves from trees so tall.
As the bodies pile up,
All their blood goes 'plup plup plup'
Down the drain, into the ground,
Where it swirls round and round.

Try all you really must,
You'll never catch me

Sing-song, Ding-dong, it's all a tune to me.
I'll be as great as famous Jack,
I'm a new legacy.
You cannot stop the best,
And that is what I am.
I promise you I'll beat the rest,
You're eating from my hand.

Inch by inch I am the slaught
Learned all from being self-taught
My eyes dig deep in your core
Blood red dirt, it longs for more.
From the grave, these sunken souls
Shriek my name, voices like coals

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inkmaster commented on You can't catch me

07-21-2010

dark and twisted nice flow i liked it....Inkmaster

AxelPyro1

07/22/2010

thank you....my friends say "other than the meaning, it's a good song." I turned it into a song.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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