You Don't Care

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  • Sadness

    You Don't Care
    I come home
    You’re not there
    I love you
    You don’t care
    I lift up
    You bring down
    I bring joy
    You bring frowns
    I want you
    You need me
    There is no us
    There can’t be we
    What can I do?
    What can I say?
    I want you
    You push me away
    You hurt me more
    Each day and night
    Don’t make me cry
    Don’t want to fight
    Need you around
    You’re never there
    Wish we could be
    But you don’t care

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    CraigStyle commented on You Don't Care

    06-05-2009

    The killing truth is you don't love me any more. That reality hurts like hell. I feel and have felt it before I and I'm sure many others can relate. Thank you!
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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