Youth and Passion: Arrival at the Sun.

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Youth and Passion: Arrival at the Sun.

Never settle Heart, Burn Up!   Ignite in the rays of her splendor.

 Apprehension                                 Melt away.

 Trepidation                                     Immolate.
   
Forever
   exhaling smoke.

   Each second blessed with Immortality.
  
Never Dim.
  
Never Cease.

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ImStillHere commented on Youth and Passion: Arrival at the Sun.

09-06-2010

(each second blessed with Immortality)- great line. i love your poem structure and short wording. :) check out a few of my write and you'll see what i mean. definate 10

earthly commented on Youth and Passion: Arrival at the Sun.

09-05-2010

Never dim, Never cease-strong-powerful-Namaste...Earthly

RiderPunch

09/05/2010

Hey Thanks for stopping by and checking out my stuff. ^_^

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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