A Dark Affirmation

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    A Dark Affirmation

    From across the street,

    The false owl stares at me…

    And I am drawn to the dissolution in His eyes.

    …Held rapt, I look on in a mixture of terror and fascination…

    AND I SEE:

    -Pupils dilated with death-
    -Corneas punctuated by the prophecy of a bleak future-
    -Irises blackened by the hellfire of foretold damnation-

    And the mutual foresights that this inhuman prophet and I share portend a future world progressing only in its deterioration;

    A dank world of fungus and misery lessened only by eternal sleep.

    AND I WONDER:

    Has humanity truly baited its own hook?
    Has civilization grown so large that it distorts the seams of tranquility?
    Is our once-humble world really being led to the perdition depicted by my vision?


    The owl nods.

    …YES…




    -Jordan S. Daniels

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    ansari commented on A Dark Affirmation

    06-21-2010

    a poem depicting sadness with lot of imagery. only I hope we are not heading towards gloom. a 10 from me.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    Jordan’s Poems (7)

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    A Dark Affirmation 1
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