A Darker Poignant Calm

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I originally wrote Poignantly Calm in March of 2009, It has always been one of my favorite poems. I like its message and I like its current, yet retrospective feel. This is a Another Poinantly Calm poem, a little more current and a little darker. Hope you like it...

A Darker Poignant Calm


I thought I saw JFK,
Wearing a baseball hat.
It was at a Red Sox game,
He'd grown old and fat.
No one seemed to notice him,
But he looked straight at me.
He tipped his hat, shook his head,
And nodded reverently.

And then there was this calm...

I saw Martin Luther King,
On a subway train.
He was carrying 2 large books,
And had a worried look of pain.
Both the books were old and tattered,
Each was worn and torn.
Their content seemed to him what mattered,
Their testaments forlorn.

And again there was this calm...

I thought I saw Pope John Paul,
On a Harley Davidson.
In front of a VFW hall,
Among several AA friends.
He tried to look away from me,
Knew that I knew him.
He wore a leather bomber jacket,
With a POW pin.

Stronger grew the calm...

I thought I saw my Father today,
It was rather odd.
He was older, much more grey,
He looked a lot like God.
He mouthed to me several words,
That I simply could not hear.
He had this very distraught look,
His eyes were filled with tears.

All became desperately calm...

An earthquake leveled Haiti,
A quarter million died.
One month later Santiago,
Chile rocked side to side.
An airplane bound for Russian soil,
Where a massacre occurred.
Crashed and killed Poland's President,
And shocked the Polish world.
An Iceberg the size of Rhode Island,
Breaks suddenly out of place.
A volcano eruption in Iceland,
Stymies north airspace.
A child of 13 hangs himself,
Without a single word?
Seems only friends on Facebook,
Knew what his last thoughts were.

The whole world became calm...

Are these acts more prophesies?
Messages that God sends?
Are these signs indicative,
Of the world's impending end?
Are these images what they seem,
Or induced, subconscious psalms?
Lord I pray they're only dreams,
Illusions poignantly calm.


And once again, came rain...
 


Copyright © May 2010
Kevin Mooney 

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Kanicki commented on A Darker Poignant Calm

11-08-2010

Kevin this poem is a profound packed creative masterpiece! Your unique style is always captivating!! 10+ Peace, Love and Light.

Olan01 commented on A Darker Poignant Calm

05-22-2010

Not all messages from above are written in stone or even paper, but are written in our deeds and the actions of Mother Earth, as; she readies to recycle all.

Tinytree commented on A Darker Poignant Calm

05-09-2010

My newest favorite! So real, so true and written beautifully.

MrGee commented on A Darker Poignant Calm

05-05-2010

BRAVO! The poem brought me to a state of reverie, some good and perhaps some bad. a 10

Artie commented on A Darker Poignant Calm

05-03-2010

This is an extremely powerful and well written piece!! Going to my favorites list. 10 from me

kmooney

05/03/2010

Thanks Artster. I will definitely checkout your turf tonight. Hey, read my poem Natas L. Useifer and The Final Tour, you'll like them.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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