A LITTLE DITTY SPECIALLY WRITTEN FOR LAUREN

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A LITTLE DITTY SPECIALLY WRITTEN FOR LAUREN

As you and Ollie join our two families of ‘Motley Crews’

Your love and happiness is our best news.


You are a prize for my son

His role as a man has just begun.

 
We all know Ollie’s NOT perfect and he may have some flaws,

But since he bites his nails he’ll never have claws.

 
I promise you he’ll treat you like a queen,

But he can fall asleep anytime, anywhere- well you know what I mean.

 
Even though he can rub two nickels together and not let go-

He’s generous and kind to those he knows.

 
He has one quirk that drives me wild,

He slurps his cereal and then he smiles.

 
He’s huggy and lovey and kissy-poo too-

Be careful these habits might bring a grandchild or two!

 
And when his mind sets a goal, he’ll finish until the end.

Eight years in college tells that tale, my friend.

 
He’s the ‘middle child’, so treat him well-

He’s not real crazy, but he’s between two brother crazy as HELL!

 
Lauren, since they say that boys marry their mothers,

You must be the best since we’re like each other.

 
So be happy in all that lies ahead,

And if times get tough just jump in bed.

 
As I said before, you really are the grand prize,

And lucky for me we’re about the same size.



*I wrote this poem for my new daughter-in-law at her Bridal Shower and chose the Georgia Font for this posting as that is where they were married*

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ginga commented on A LITTLE DITTY SPECIALLY WRITTEN FOR LAUREN

08-21-2009

Hanna, This poem is such a generous and uplifting artform. It is music to the ears! ginga

PRober commented on A LITTLE DITTY SPECIALLY WRITTEN FOR LAUREN

07-03-2009

cool poem and nice tribute to your daughter in law!

Hanna

07/07/2009

Thanx - it was enjoyed by both families

dahlusion commented on A LITTLE DITTY SPECIALLY WRITTEN FOR LAUREN

06-26-2009

This is a beautiful poem in accepting & honoring another into one's family. The rhymes are masterful; the flow is smooth; the format is perfect.

Hanna

06/27/2009

Your comment is well recieved and quite an honor I have read some of your pieces and was blown away by your command of vocabulary and unique style. I envisioned you as a Berkley Prof.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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