Active Imagination

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    Active Imagination

    In the morning, I looked out the
    frosted windows...
    This is what I saw, when I looked up,
    Into the sky.

    A rolling ocean of waves coming
    inshore, where I felt I was
    standing, and the birds were flying above.

    People just see white or blue clouds
    stretched across a light, grey sky full
    of colors, the sun isn't up, yet,
    But then I looked in another direction,
    And...
    There's a shoreline where the water laps,
    the land and islands that stretched
    across the water, the mountains are
    scattered across the land and...
    Everything seems to be
    in motion.

    People look and then seem to say,
    "What a lovely view."
    That is what I saw one cold, early
    morning before winter came.

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    Kukia commented on Active Imagination

    06-06-2009

    WoW!,very sureal,I lke these.very good read,Bryanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

    free2poet

    06/06/2009

    Thanks for reading!

    FindingJune commented on Active Imagination

    06-05-2009

    This is a nice poem. I think it can stand without the last stanza. The commentary seems to throw the rest of the poem off.

    free2poet

    06/05/2009

    Thank you,my poem tells what I see then at the end show what others see..

    SClark20xx commented on Active Imagination

    04-08-2009

    Beautiful!

    free2poet

    06/05/2009

    Thank you for your nice comment.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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