Thinking of You

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    Thinking of You
    In the early morning hours,
    When the world is still;
    I think of you
    In my dreams...

    How I wish my love
    Could shorten the miles...
    Memories linger here
    With me.

    Every dream has an ending,
    But now you are gone...
    How can I fill this gap
    In my dreams.

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    daniel081180 commented on Thinking of You

    07-01-2009

    this is a very good poem. Short yet to the point . Great job. Hope to read a lot more from you.
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    free2poet

    07/13/2009

    Thanks for your positive comments.

    optimistic commented on Thinking of You

    06-08-2009

    Great I wish there was more said it seem like you wanted to write more to this piece yet never had a chance is it possible your dream ended to soon the love you mourn for you wanted to say more about. Great poem
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    free2poet

    06/08/2009

    It was written at a time of hurt. I was afraid, and moving on with my life.

    Kukia commented on Thinking of You

    06-06-2009

    A longing for a love gone.I felt this one.aWWsome!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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    free2poet

    06/06/2009

    Thanks. You got it.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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