Bed Time Story

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  • Jedi4Jesus
  • haven't been on the sight for awhile but had written a couple poems i'd like to invite everyone to read, What it's all about and You Promised

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Written on Sunday, February 1, 2009 at 8:49am

Bed Time Story

As I sit beside your hospital bed and you rest your head in peace
Our Fathers Spirit fills your veins to empower your release.
The days gone by remind me of when I was laid up too.
You served me and you nurtured me and that’s how our love grew.
The times that I was in a cast, not once or twice, but three,
You loved me unconditionally and gave your heart to me.
Our vows do I remember as I committed to our Lord.
To always seek His wisdom by relying on His Word.
In good times and the bad times, in sickness and in health,
You are a spiritual blessing I’ve found in Christ
Now that is truly wealth.

Ramil

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MSVanallen commented on Bed Time Story

07-05-2009

What a blessing to see that love is still so strong in the world we live in. Not only the love for your wife, but love for the One who gave it,,, MSV

wheelsal commented on Bed Time Story

06-26-2009

I love this piece witch flows with your strength....................................................

jademelissa74 commented on Bed Time Story

06-21-2009

Wonderfully written! I am in tears. This hits home for me! May the Lord in Heaven soothe your heart in the loss of your wife. May he give you strength and comfort the remainder days of your life. Great Job! God bless you!

rossmangeles commented on Bed Time Story

06-21-2009

Dear Ramil: Love is best tested by time and situations in life. With God on our side, who can be against us. I enjoyed reading your poem. Keep it up! Cheers!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Jedi4Jesus’s Poems (16)

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Title Comments
LOVE 1
You Promised 1
What it's all about 0
THE DAY 0
I miss my mommy 2
Recovery 9
It is well 0
Grief 2
Why 4
Home Coming 2
Deeply Rooted 5
Quiet Desperation 3
Take Captive 2
My Walk 2
Bed Time Story 5
The Call 11