Behind Your Eyes

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    Behind Your Eyes
    I wish I could see deep inside you,
    In the places no one else can go,
    The scars you hide from the outside,
    Through the walls around your heart,
    Find the the key to your soul,
    Behind your eyes.

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    ListninEar commented on Behind Your Eyes

    09-14-2009

    I wonder if you could build on this poem. I liked it so far, but hope for more eventually.
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    trocka7 commented on Behind Your Eyes

    09-05-2009

    This is short and sweet, beautifully touching and heartfelt....I relate to this very much, thanks for sharing it.
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    reCHrEfleca commented on Behind Your Eyes

    04-10-2009

    love it, wish there's more to it..
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    sk commented on Behind Your Eyes

    04-08-2009

    Very nice write.
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