Daydream

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    Daydream

    Daydream

    she's a vision in her white cotton dress,
    in a field of yellow flowers,
    i envy the wind,
    for the way it plays in her hair,
    touches her skin,
    pulls her dress against her,
    giving just a hint of what lies beneath,
    a bouquet of flowers in her hand,
    yellow, pink, blue, and white,
    they seem brighter in her hand
    more vital, vibrant,
    she lifts her face to the sun,
    and graces me with a smile,
    a simple gesture of her hand,
    compels me closer,
    with arms around waists,,
    she guides me into sunlight,

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    trocka7 commented on Daydream

    09-05-2009

    mmmmmm, this is lovely :) you have a great sensitivity within you that is very powerful, great write....

    rajeespace commented on Daydream

    06-19-2009

    I really like the sense that you put in this piece great job well done don't forget to check on mine also.

    sk commented on Daydream

    04-08-2009

    Oh this is just beautiful! So sensitive, and what great attention to detail...you see the small things that are so often overlooked by men; I applaud your poetry!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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