betrayal

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    betrayal

    i hold you close to me tonight
    with all my might
    my fingers run down your spine
    i want you to be mine
    i'll be your shining star
    and guide you through the night
    ill be with you no matter how far
    this fight i wont lose tonight
    i pull you close to me
    as my heart starts to race
    i stare into a beatiful face
    a face of an angel
    that brightens the darkest rooms
    time slows as if we are the only ones tonight
    but i feel another fight
    you raise your voice
    silentin all other noises
    the night freezes in shock
    this happens alot
    tears stream down your cheek as you tell me
    that you want to leave
    i sit quietly
    and watch you gather your stuff and disappear without a trace
    i chase after you but i cannot find the way
    i wonder aimlessy into the alleys
    tears stream down my face
    tears jump to their own fate
    i cannot face you now
    all i've left is a broken heart
    you can find me in the alley behind the bar
    drinking a bottle of loneliness
    i have no one to care for
    my big heart cracks and shatters
    it doesnt matter
    i will be fine as long as my emotions are hidden
    because you have ridden them
    the only one i cared for the most
    but it goes to show
    you never loved me to being with
    it was a myth

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    themommyof2 commented on betrayal

    11-24-2009

    So sorry that you had to experience that horrible pain, but know in your heart that you will love again.

    cdeluhery87 commented on betrayal

    10-16-2009

    bravo! as sad/tortured your words are in this poem, it made for a great! tears stream down your cheek as you tell me that you want to leave i sit quietly and watch you gather your stuff and disappear without a trace"...like this part, for your voice doesnt matter to the uncaring...i agree with knights=, how undeserving of your love

    knight4696 commented on betrayal

    10-10-2009

    Jon - This is one of Man's greatest Hurts - to be betrayed by a loved one. Just remember ... This person was never deserving of your love to begin with. Do not dwell on them .. they are not worth the tears. We must all move on .... The right one will someday find you.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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