My Love For You

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    My Love For You

    Girl come with me tonight
    because your are my star shining bright
    you have a smile
    that can be seen for many miles
    we play like children
    we laugh as if we are still children
    you are always on my mind
    you will always shine no matter how dark the night is
    i see you everywhere i go
    i see your bright brown eyes
    when i look up to the sky
    your smile
    i can see from 100s of miles away
    the gentle breeze of air
    reminds me of your sofr brown hair
    your touch
    i miss so very much
    i need you tonight more than ever
    i wanna keep you in my arms forever
    but i know that will never happen
    i hear someone is tapping
    as i answer the door
    my jaw about hit the floor
    you stand there
    looking oh so fair
    i wrap my arms around you and pull tight
    and i kiss with all my might
    then you whisper thoses 3 words to me

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    ShanneN commented on My Love For You

    10-17-2009

    i LOVED this one sooo much! its like fairy tale love story. it was very good and this just like,inspired me =]. great poem!

    Saylar commented on My Love For You

    10-16-2009

    Wow, you are merely 18 years of age? Astounding feeling and depth to your writing! Please continue! Your writing is inspiring!

    knight4696 commented on My Love For You

    10-10-2009

    Jon - A very emotional and romantic tribute to the one you love. A very nice Job.

    lisawoodman96 commented on My Love For You

    02-09-2009

    not bad at all,,

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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