thirst for more

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    thirst for more

    as i open my eyes
    i remember all of the lies
    i am starting to feel dry
    feeling like im going to die
    just one more hit
    all i need one more fix
    i crave for it
    i feel like im fallin into a bottomless pit
    toxic poison flow out of me
    my eyes start to bleed
    the voices inside are chanting
    with their demon like chant
    sends me in a downward spiral
    i feel like like i am falling a thousand miles
    the demons are getting stronger
    as my hunger
    feeds them
    they have all of my other feelings blended

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    cdeluhery87 commented on thirst for more

    10-16-2009

    relate to this poem on so many different levels...looking forward to reading more

    MOMofTWINS commented on thirst for more

    10-14-2009

    Ive seem situations of this nature happen to people I know and it is heart breaking. Once you touch your toe to the water it grabs your whole being and pulls you in and its tragic... Terribly wonderful poem, hon.

    nini2323 commented on thirst for more

    10-12-2009

    Wow this is rockin, I could totally put myself into it, feels similar to my own, nice job

    dumplin commented on thirst for more

    10-10-2009

    this is very dark and sad, sweetie. I feel very much the same right now. there are only a couple of errors in this piece, but I loved it nontheless.

    knight4696 commented on thirst for more

    10-10-2009

    Excellent Jon! A look into one's self loathing ... A topic that I myself have written about. I think we all let this emotion take hold of us when we are depressed. Another Great Job!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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